Here is my pitch:
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I will work on trying to create a more customer-centered idea so that it will appeal to more people. I will be more confident in my pitch, as if I need to present to some important CEO.
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Venture Concept No. 2
(1) Opportunity My opportunity is a food truck that goes around campus at night, after the on campus food places are closed, and gives st...
Hello Chloe,
ReplyDeleteI like how you’ve become much more structured with your idea and how to execute it. I can hear the confidence in your second pitch and commend you for being able to do such a swell job. I really hope you are able to push this proposal to the point of success. I feel as if redistribution of foods will be well accepted and appreciated if you can work past guidelines! I love your cheese danishes.
Hey Chloe,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch is really good! You have made several improvements from your first pitch, ultimately making your pitch that much more interesting. You seem really calm and composed throughout the course of your pitch. Only suggestion I can make is to stand up. Overall, great job with this assignment!
Hey Chloe, I think that your pitch this week was a large improvement over your first pitch. It shows that you took the criticism you received to heart and took the time to cultivate your message and idea. The thing that I have always admired about your idea is the selflessness and helpful manner of the idea. In a class where a lot of the ideas are aimed at personal gain (mine included) your idea has always stood out. It is nice to see you progressively earn your footing. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHey Chloe! I really liked all of your reflections but I think this assignment was supposed to be a second attempt at your elevator pitch. But anyways, for what you did record I liked your notice of improving tone and style. I do agree that this will give you a strong continued foundation for the rest of the course.
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