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Venture Concept No. 2
(1) Opportunity My opportunity is a food truck that goes around campus at night, after the on campus food places are closed, and gives st...
(1) Opportunity My opportunity is a food truck that goes around campus at night, after the on campus food places are closed, and gives st...
Hi Chloe, I thought your pitch was great. It shows how much more your idea has grown. The level of familiarity you have shown with your idea is shown of the back and also you focus on how it improves the community. The ideas and feedback that you’ve received in the past shows up in your pitch and it shows that your pitch has evolved each time getting better.
ReplyDeleteHello Chloe,
ReplyDeleteI feel as though your elevator pitches become much more developed as you continue to practice. I really like where you’re headed with this idea and think that you will succeed if you are able to speak to the right people. If not, at least you, as an employee are allowed to bring home food for yourself and your roommate. It is nice of them to distribute it that way, however if they are willing to do that, there should be consideration of doing the same distribution among those who are in need as well.
Hey Chloe,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this weeks assignment! This attempt at your elevator pitch seems really well thought out and planned. You seem like you have memorized a majority of the material about your potential business. Memorizing and better understanding the material you talk about greatly improves how your speech is perceived by others. Great Job this week!